| 2006-08-22 19:23:20 |
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Another great story with a great leading lady, Blade. But just as with Tracy the Crack Whore in your other current series, I found myself wishing for the back story on Becky. We know her father abuses her, but we don't know enough about her upbringing. Just a thought. Have a 10! |
| 2006-08-22 22:03:51 |
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mm vary nice good stroy HOPE a number 3 comes out |
| 2006-08-22 23:44:38 |
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Need to know the bad of the father? Why she is so sexually knowledgeable? Wanting a finger in the ass? You have great fantasy's. Maybe they will come true in the retirement home. |
| 2006-08-23 10:46:05 |
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this was brilliant I would love to be in that position with becky |
| 2006-08-24 11:07:22 |
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another great story-hope there is a chapter 3?keep up the great writing.thanx-junkfree |