| 2006-09-12 02:53:35 |
Interstate Innocense II
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Awful, started out with no preluse and ended with the reader in mid-air. Poorly connected and made absolutely no sense. |
| 2006-09-12 03:41:06 |
Interstate Innocense II
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to the guy below... are you the dumbest fuck in the world? did you notice the name of the story? did you see it was part 2? good lord. did you just get half your brain sucked out or something? |
| 2006-09-12 03:46:35 |
Interstate Innocense II
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dude its hard to find the other parts of stories. where is the first chapter? |
| 2006-09-29 16:15:28 |
Interstate Innocense II
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too young girl must continu the story |
| 2006-09-30 20:59:04 |
Interstate Innocense II
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I like the innocence of this story. Wish I could meet someone like Becky |