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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-02-14 01:39:35 | DOM SIR part 2_(0) | Ahhh, yes. This is what we in the screenwriting business call, raising the "dramatic question." Her predicament has succeeded in raising the level of interest in the reader above that of the simply curious by describing something we can all empathize with and in so doing have created a character with depth and her emotions are that much more real. |
| 2004-02-15 16:25:15 | DOM SIR part 2_(0) | everything master roth says is true! this is making a very good scene. keep it up and i may find out who you are and pay you for more stories. keep up the good work. from Krim. |
| 2004-08-10 17:57:41 | DOM SIR part 2_(0) | A little shot this time but great none the less. |
| 2006-09-01 22:30:26 | DOM SIR part 2_(0) | I read that in about 2 seconds. What the fuck? Why is it so short? |
| 2004-02-14 01:39:35 | DOM SIR part 2_(1) | Ahhh, yes. This is what we in the screenwriting business call, raising the "dramatic question." Her predicament has succeeded in raising the level of interest in the reader above that of the simply curious by describing something we can all empathize with and in so doing have created a character with depth and her emotions are that much more real. |