| 2007-11-05 18:21:52 |
Harry Potter and the Lust Powder
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hi im15 and i love the hp storys especialy the ones with harry and ron they make my cum hit the wall |
| 2008-01-24 21:04:24 |
Harry Potter and the Lust Powder
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This story is good. I think that it has the flavor of Harry Potter. I kinda thought Harry and Ron belonged together, they fight like lovers. Your doing a fine job, keep it up |
| 2006-09-04 10:33:27 |
Daddys Findings
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poorly developed and too short. spend a little more time building and a little less time trying to get off while your writing the story! |
| 2006-09-04 10:53:18 |
Daddys Findings
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very short-guess you get off quick,huh?good story though-more pleeez! |
| 2006-09-04 11:15:00 |
Daddys Findings
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wayyyyyyy to short |