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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-05 05:12:28 | Daddys Findings | too short, not enough description, what are the girls like + how old? try using paragraphs to oppen your story out some more. needs work but it could be great! |
| 2006-09-05 05:39:26 | Daddys Findings | it would of been better if they were sayng shit like oh daddy harder or one of the girls saying you like fucking ur precious babies dont you. thats right fuck ur daughter stick it in her, and u could of gave them names. |
| 2006-09-05 06:52:48 | Daddys Findings | too short |
| 2006-09-05 15:33:09 | Daddys Findings | I can't even read it. Please use some paragraphs. |
| 2006-09-05 18:12:22 | Daddys Findings | I'd say good start. But like other's have you said, you do need paragraphs and just a little longer would make it a bit more interesting. I'll give you an 8 for trying. Goodluck next time. |