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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-04 12:36:54 | Daddys Findings | Although this storty is fiction, you wrote it as you were thier daddies. In that case who the lucky womem that allow you a four or five year old to fuck them. you must had a big coak at the time. I am asuming that the oldesr girl was13yo. Otherwise story was ok but short |
| 2006-09-04 13:17:07 | Daddys Findings | where the hell was mom ? ;-) |
| 2006-09-04 19:26:47 | Daddys Findings | P A R A G R A P H S !!! |
| 2006-09-04 19:46:50 | Daddys Findings | Spelling is a big part, and so is describing the action with more than just how many minutes it continued. If the girl was a virgin, perhaps talking about how it was to lose her virginity... Too short, not enough descriptive detail, and generally poor writing style. It's not a bad start, but needs lots of work. |
| 2006-09-04 20:41:44 | Daddys Findings | you suck |