| 2006-09-10 11:51:44 |
Dad can play, too.
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wow.... i love it... you need to make part 2 times ten man, that was amazing, you are an excellent writer, unlike some of these morons that cnt spl or typ 4 nething.... if you get my drift... |
| 2006-09-10 18:30:10 |
Dad can play, too.
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great lead in story-you have my complete attention! |
| 2006-09-15 11:48:38 |
Dad can play, too.
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Nooooo why cut it so short. It was getting good! |
| 2006-09-16 13:09:25 |
Dad can play, too.
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great intro to a very hot story! |
| 2006-09-19 12:49:58 |
Dad can play, too.
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good story dude. And for the forth person who wrote that comment about spelling you need to check your own spelling |