| 2007-07-04 01:24:46 |
Dad can play, too.
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to short , your a dumb ass |
| 2008-03-25 04:03:07 |
Dad can play, too.
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READER UR A FUCKIN DUMBASS. CLICK ON THE WRITERS PROFILE TO SEE THE OTHER PARTS. 9/10 FROM ME |
| 2006-09-11 06:56:21 |
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Being a native German, you must tell me how all these german women had American or English names? I mean, Dot? That's not German. The only German name I saw was Inge. Other than that, the story drags on a little, but it's not bad. By the way, anytime you write a noun in German, it has to be capitalized. So no more liebchen, or liebling. Be sure to put a capital "L" in front of those words. |
| 2006-09-12 17:44:36 |
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Read the story again, they were not all German women. Dot is a nickname for Doris that my father-in-law gave my wife as a young girl. Further, I do not read or write German. All I claim is basic conversational skills but I am familiar with some "foreign" terms of endearment which I thought would be nice in my stories.. |
| 2006-09-10 15:59:27 |
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i got it the first time... |