| 2006-09-16 15:41:03 |
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Good continuation of a helluva story. Tex You got an eight |
| 2006-12-07 21:36:20 |
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A bit repetitive! The first time through was great! 9! |
| 2006-09-10 17:28:11 |
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not bad style, but its rather hard to understand who is who and stuff. better explain that stuff at the beginning |
| 2006-09-16 15:45:21 |
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Whew! These wear my hand out! Tex Another eight |
| 2006-09-18 13:54:09 |
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Sorry, but these stories are sort of like a continuing soap opra. You have to start it at the begining so you know who all the players are. The begining is "Charli" when.....well you read it. |