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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-13 17:16:29 | Flight of Sin | the tense you use while thinking about your daughter is wierd and hard to understand. I couldn't finish your story its so distracting. |
| 2006-09-14 06:15:53 | Flight of Sin | I understand. I originally wrote it directly to someone so it is conversational and mostly in the present tense. If I put up the subsequent parts I will attempt to revise them to the past tense. Thanks. |
| 2006-09-14 17:05:08 | Flight of Sin | I think its a unique way to right, though it would be wierd for a guy to read it as if they are the girl but it is still exilerating. Great Job |
| 2006-09-14 20:54:53 | Flight of Sin | Thanks for the complement. Since I write nothing with men in mind I will keep it the way it is. |
| 2006-09-24 07:22:19 | Flight of Sin | 3 people fitting in a small ass jet bathroom?...i dont think so. |