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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-15 21:29:16 | Who Took My Cherry? - pt4 | where is part 5 i loved it wanna read part 5 |
| 2006-09-18 22:11:22 | Sexz on the Farm part 4 | Another good read keep it up don't think I'd be into the ass fucking but someone soft and neat licking my pussy I know would drive me crazy 10/10 |
| 2006-09-13 10:30:39 | Mom's vacation | Oh Baby!! Reminds me of a good starting for a long series. |
| 2006-09-13 10:34:18 | Mom's vacation | Paragraphs are your friend. That's tip number one. Secondly, you have a huge plot problem. Apparently everyone knows what's going on, as we can infer from Jan's comment to knock first and to not get upset, everyone wanted it, yet Greg blackmails his mother in to a blow job by threatening to tell. Dad is well aware of what's going on in the other room, yet mom doesn't want him to know? Overall, not a terrible story, but not a great one either. You're grammer could also use some polishing up. -S- |
| 2006-09-13 14:09:53 | Mom's vacation | Im willing to bet Dad doesnt get Moms ass so thats why she gave in to the blackmail. Good for the son too as I know hes gonna tap that ass repeadetly from now on as well. |