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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-15 21:52:03 | Mom's vacation | bad flow but good plot just keep writing |
| 2006-09-20 04:51:42 | Mom's vacation | ShakeZula's comment is spot on. Without paragraphs the story - such as it is - is lost in a droning dirge. |
| 2006-09-24 10:23:30 | Mom's vacation | Good plot, poor prresentation. One paragraph for all the sex--No way. Then having his mother give Craig a partial blowjob after having his cock in her ass--Once again, no way. A good story is one that is believable--this story isn't believable. Gave it 3/10. |
| 2006-10-19 13:21:27 | Mom's vacation | Loved the story. Do take more time in next story to space it out. Can you write more about this. Next day and what happened as you faced your parents. |
| 2006-10-28 15:41:19 | Mom's vacation | u uu |