| 2007-08-13 10:48:02 |
Mom's vacation
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We enjoyed this one and reminded me of a close friend that walked in on his mom getting banged by two of her co-workers. |
| 2006-09-22 15:40:57 |
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Hell, I had to quit reading before I read it all! Had to get hold of myself, if you know what I mean. This is one HOT story. Tex ten of ten |
| 2006-09-22 18:39:55 |
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it was great but i think you should maybe have thought about writing different chapters and just releasing them with a day in between. that way it was more organized and you wouldn't that that long of a story. |
| 2006-09-22 20:52:37 |
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this story was written in the worst way, and no 17 yrs old would be treated like a baby, as he was talkin 2 her, u should improve ur style. the story was building up verrrrrry slowly in the beginning, so u should improved that, and it's very long also, not that i mind that, i loved other long stories like "My Sister The Bitch Part 1", "Paradise Mum" but this 1 was boring, all in all i think u should take a 7/10. wishing that chapter 2 would be better. |
| 2006-09-23 15:13:12 |
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Thanks to the appreciative readers who have scored this story at 8.7 at the 20 vote stage. |