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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-13 15:10:36 | Dad doesn't Know | wow |
| 2006-09-13 15:18:21 | Dad doesn't Know | Hmm good story, but I think you should work on breaking it up. Also you had some spelling errors. Although I do put more into creativity then I do proper grammer. All and all I give it an 8. |
| 2006-09-13 16:35:05 | Dad doesn't Know | chode |
| 2006-09-13 18:54:45 | Dad doesn't Know | Heather Jason and Michael (Stacy and Susies kids).... Do they call you Grandpe,Dad, or uncle.. Seeing that you married your mom, fathered your sisters kids, and in fact are there mothers... brother?.. I liked it 9/10 but if i was you i would have gone with Stacy or at the lest Susie... |
| 2006-09-13 20:02:19 | Dad doesn't Know | it was good up until the end. not logical at all, and you dont walk into a room and go YOU FUCKED YOUR SISTERS. its not that easy. and ew, who would marry their mom. change the ending and run this through a spell check, and you'll have something solid. |