| 2006-09-13 22:00:44 |
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WELL I LIKED THE ENDING |
| 2006-09-13 23:44:05 |
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ok this story is good I liked it but the things that puts it down is that you forget up to 3 or 4 words every now and then "moved my head suck her nipples " that is just not good and what is with this Mirrored fucking stupid to say. I usualy dont comment but I just had to tell you. 7/10 |
| 2006-09-21 03:25:52 |
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not bad could use some work to be better but over all a 7/10 |
| 2006-09-29 04:09:37 |
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go to school and learn how to spell and form complete sentences you retard. but other than that, it was a pretty hot story. |
| 2006-10-11 00:23:40 |
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that not bad story is good |