| 2006-11-23 15:37:31 |
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the friend's name changed from jared to daren,,, |
| 2006-12-12 14:08:07 |
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very good. I wish i was one of the 3 guys. |
| 2006-12-20 14:42:03 |
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spelling needs work but oyher than that very good |
| 2007-01-03 13:53:58 |
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i wish i was sanny!!! lucky bitch. |
| 2007-01-05 01:11:37 |
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OK I CAN SAY THIS IS NOT SO BAD BUT SWEETY YOU NEED 2 GO OVER THE EDGE ALITTLE MORE I KNOW IT LOOKS SICK SAYING THAT BUT THINK OF IT BEING LIKE A PORN MOVIE WITH A CAR CRASH AT THE E.N.D. THAT WOULD ROCK BUT I LIKE THE POWER IN THIS STORY NICE JOB. |