| 2006-09-21 14:01:12 |
Becoming a Pet For a Slut
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The story was really hot but the first guy was right, you can't write worth a shit! Learn to spell!! |
| 2006-09-21 20:03:49 |
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great stuff, i cant wait 4 the next one 10/10 definitly,keep writing man, its gud stuff |
| 2006-09-22 03:35:53 |
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I don't like it in real life but I love it in stories. Ignore the comments on the style etc. Anyone who reads these stories for their literary value must be totally crazy! I'm looking for more. |
| 2006-09-24 22:08:04 |
Becoming a Pet For a Slut
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Need a little work on the gramer, but overall a very good story. |
| 2007-03-20 22:09:37 |
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KICK ASS!!! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER |