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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-22 15:57:15 | My Sister the Nun ch 6 | For reader below. Hopefully the story made you masturbate. What were you wondering? |
| 2006-09-22 16:07:45 | My Sister the Nun ch 6 | (continued from ch. 5...this is the last one, i promise) now, this is an erotic story, and i know that i should not expect more, but i see too much potential in the writing, despite the simplicity of it, to completely ignore it. that has happened with many stories on this website, i assure you. |
| 2006-09-22 19:04:16 | My Sister the Nun ch 6 | Dear Peace: You say that you see too much potential in the writing, despite the simplicity of it, to completely ignore it. The problem I have is I’m not writing for the top ten percent, therefore I have to bring it down to a level where “one handed” readers can also read and enjoy it in their own way. As you know according to Sir William, the father of all writers, there are only ten basic stories, and the most important things in any story are the characters. I spend a considerable amount of time researching new and varied locations and developing the personalities of the characters so everyone can see someone or something, which might be of interest to them, otherwise the whole thing would be nothing more than people having sex. One usually with big tits and the other with a 12” dick. |
| 2006-11-03 22:28:48 | My Sister the Nun ch 6 | G'day again, Really "world piece"? Try "world PEACE". I'm beginning to believe that some of the non too flattering comments made about your writing may be justified. If you want good reviews then provide some good grammatical writing. And don't slag off at your reviewers. You invited them. You know my name and my "location". |
| 2006-12-28 23:07:42 | My Sister the Nun ch 6 | the writing was sub-par at best. the dialogue was unrealistic and childish. the plot, while good in theory, is poor in it's execution. honestly, you need some work on your writing skills. but, as an erotic story, which it obviously is, it certainly works. |