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Comments from READER
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2006-11-03 23:18:40 | My Sister the Nun ch 7 | G'DAy, Bithday "suit" is the term you were wanting."Suite" is a plush room in a hotel amongst other things. "Wave" is what we do to acknowledge another's presence, whereas "WAIVE" is to not insist on a "legal" right. You do yourself no favours by your sloppy writing, which is a pity because the story is interesting apart from the switch from Jennifer/Jessica to his sister. You know my name and my location. Spetre |
2007-02-13 01:15:13 | My Sister the Nun ch 7 | I wonder if these critics have ever written a story. I click to their bio and I don't see any titles. Mike aka X |
2007-02-21 20:47:36 | My Sister the Nun ch 7 | is there any "history" to this web site????.....I get's very frustrating reading the later chapters of a good story and not knowing how it started!!! |
2007-04-03 10:42:11 | My Sister the Nun ch 7 | This story is awesome/ and even though there are some type o's you can still read it and any1 that says anything about is just weird sreiously i mean who goes through a story as hot as this one and notices misspellings. Any way just to let you all know im a girl/and my pussy is sssssoooooooo fucking wet right now after reading ur story. A+ Great Job. -Love, Amy King |
2006-09-22 15:16:26 | My Sister the Nun Ch. 8 final | I must say that you did capture my attention. Even if it was poorly written and horribly ineffective with the way robert seemed the only person who had the least bit of common sense, it was a good concept and an entertaining story. The biggest problem I have with the storyline, though, is that it ended too soon. Robert should go to the school, tear it off its fucking hinges, then go back home, beat the shit out of his father and bring his mom and brother to california so they can live normal lives. But then, that's just me, and it's your story. Peace. |