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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-10 23:55:58 | Six Mile High Club chapter 4 | I like this, he starts to dislike just pure sex (something 99.9% of the stories lack the realism to have) and then your not so subtle hint "Clitoris; clitoris; clitoris. Michael would never forget the girl's clitoris." Good story, can't wait for it to be first person again though. |
| 2006-11-04 17:06:03 | Six Mile High Club chapter 4 | “You might check your over use of commas. The sentence you wrote (below) was made to show you were a writer or poet of some kind, however it was incorrect. Please read it again out loud. “while the story line was, well, -- possible the errors, mistakes, bad punctuation et al destroyed too much of the mood.” What? You didn’t complete the sentence. Any halfway decent writer would know that the sentence was incomplete. Oh! That’s right, you are not a writer … are you? By the way I might ask you, as you seem to be an expert, aren’t errors and mistakes the same or similar? You end your criticism with this sentence, |
| 2007-02-13 12:42:07 | Six Mile High Club chapter 4 | 10/10 and like the reader wrote on 9/27 Funny! |
| 2007-03-06 14:01:19 | A unusual situation Pt 5 V.W.O.M. BUSTED | THAT FUCKING TEENAGE CUNT FINALLY GOT IT AS HARD AS SHE WAS MAKING U DO ALL THOSE OTHER LITTLE COCKSLUTS. were those real cops in those police uniforms or were they other firefighters? |
| 2006-09-27 09:03:11 | A surprize for brother | good story...not detalied enough for me on the fucking part...but still good |