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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-28 19:31:02 | twin sisters together forever | yes terrible grammer, but good story. Try and add detail next time too. |
| 2006-09-28 19:57:15 | twin sisters together forever | 1.i think if you practice a bit, you could become a quite good writer. 2. TIME FOR PART 2 twins GONE WILD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2006-09-29 05:59:28 | twin sisters together forever | Hey Sexfreakdude, when you chide someone about using proper "grammer" you ought to know that it's spelled "grammar," with two "a's" not an "e" at the end. |
| 2006-09-29 12:20:44 | twin sisters together forever | too much trouble to read from the outset with your run-on sentence of a story(?) and misspellings of words that interfere with what should be a natural flow of descriptions however again your run-on sentence only annoys those of us who know how to read and I hope you realize that I'm mocking you in your own style(?) as I write this boo hiss if I could give you a negative rating i would |
| 2006-10-08 07:13:07 | twin sisters together forever | who gives a fuck about grammar, good story, not that believable but it was still good, maybe all you people who wrote the comments should just read the story instead of looking for mistakes |