| 2007-06-11 04:45:08 |
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This is the best writing that I have read on this site! You really should write part 2. I suspect that, if I were in Mike's shoes, I would be much less 'civilised'. |
| 2007-06-19 16:48:02 |
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Why haven't you finished the story ? |
| 2007-06-20 17:44:25 |
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Dude, you're a fucking tool. If this is actually true, you need to fuck some chick in front of her too make her do the driving, bring it in public, that kind of thing. Keep a mistress or something. But first, grow some fucking balls. |
| 2007-06-22 21:32:38 |
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This was the most painful shit I have ever read! The grammer, oh my god, my third grade english teacher would have killed herself trying to read this. I rated this a 5 because beyond all the twisted assed writing lies a decent story. Dude, by all means write part two but get a proofreader or six to check it out before you unleash it on the world. By the way, IF this is true, you're an ass of the dumbest kind. Love is kind but it ain't fucking retarded, I would have killed them in the fucking resteraunt. |
| 2007-08-08 18:25:58 |
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OMG, great story. I came twice! Does your wife have a sister? |