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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-07 18:44:59 | Mixed Metaphors III | Absolutely wonderful story. It's a great love story, just with all the juicy parts included. Love it :D 10/10 Almost made me build a tear when they were in the shower. :D |
| 2006-10-08 10:59:02 | Mixed Metaphors III | Besides the sex, really good fun; the beginnings of genuine characters, dialog displacing description. The only blemish: the chapter should have built to a climax rather than a post-shopping rumination. |
| 2006-10-08 15:17:56 | Mixed Metaphors III | But then, somebody would say that my work is too predictable. Even the best pitchers throw a curve once in a while. |
| 2006-10-09 03:29:32 | Mixed Metaphors III | I like it... It is truly enjoyable to read quality writing, as opposed to a 5 paragraph fuck fest. Both have their time and their place, but I dig this. |
| 2006-10-17 09:45:46 | Mixed Metaphors III | Great Series, not just sex but a true LOVE story. |