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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-06 11:07:22 | My Wife, My Hooker | Not a bad story, but you need to fix who is saying what. You have dialogue that is obviously the guy and it says "she said" then you have her dialogue and it says "I said" It's really noticeable and takes you out of the story. |
| 2006-10-06 20:10:58 | My Wife, My Hooker | Not even the idea is very good and the writing is like a 7th grader in heat. |
| 2006-10-06 22:14:34 | My Wife, My Hooker | it was real good except for the shoe thing. please hurry with the next |
| 2006-10-07 06:05:03 | My Wife, My Hooker | yeah, please learn to diffentiate between "I said" and "she said", dude. apart from that pretty hot! cheers from berlin, germany |
| 2006-10-07 12:37:18 | My Wife, My Hooker | please finish!!! |