| 2006-12-20 08:43:38 |
kelly makes the grade
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Poorly written |
| 2006-12-20 08:51:11 |
kelly makes the grade
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i agree with the last comment, nuff said |
| 2006-12-20 10:38:39 |
kelly makes the grade
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Yeah to bad you wern't an english teacher instead of math 1/10 |
| 2006-12-20 11:54:30 |
kelly makes the grade
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come on guys so im bad at grammer. hows the story |
| 2006-12-20 16:17:18 |
kelly makes the grade
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The idea of the story is a good one, but it's just poorly told. You have potential. Read more of the stories on this site and get an idea for how the plot would flow. |