| 2006-12-23 11:54:41 |
kelly makes the grade
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That feedbacks a little harsh, good story just needs a little length and the grammar sorting al in all good attempt. |
| 2006-12-26 03:23:29 |
kelly makes the grade
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Shit head person-- shithead story |
| 2006-12-27 05:55:09 |
kelly makes the grade
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Terrible writing style. Terrible story line. Pretty bad all around. 2/10 at best |
| 2006-12-20 15:16:19 |
Tied up for the night
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um, women don't have a prostate gland...and when that left breast was being 'messaged', was that text or voice? |
| 2006-12-20 20:31:29 |
Tied up for the night
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weak,weak,weak |