| 2006-12-20 17:05:29 |
kelly makes the grade
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not bad...liked the 'extra credit' thought about it... 7/10 |
| 2006-12-20 21:30:11 |
kelly makes the grade
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don't give up your day job |
| 2006-12-21 06:58:19 |
kelly makes the grade
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a few miscues,pretty good idea to work with7/10 |
| 2006-12-21 17:55:02 |
kelly makes the grade
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It's a nice concept...I don't mean this to sound prickish, but it's really too bad it wasn't written by someone with english as their first language, it had the potential to be a beautiful story, but everything else about it... horrible. |
| 2006-12-21 22:21:47 |
kelly makes the grade
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fucking asshole keep your day job . dont jack off to this stupid fantasy and dont write any more |