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Comments from READER
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2006-12-24 02:26:00 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | Yeah, good story. To be honest, I found your writing to be refreshing, at first. And then I read some of your other stories and soon found myself rolling-my-eyes and laughing at some of your efforts. Without a doubt your stories are good, you write very well, but it's a distraction to be over-stuffed on SOME of your pointless drivel. Hell, your stories are already long, give us a break and and have a friend (who can be honest with you) edit your stories... see what happens. still good though... -blade- |
2006-12-26 04:54:06 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | alot of talk and babble cassies mumbling gets annoying but progression, description, and over all story are fantastic |
2006-12-26 07:15:27 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | Loved it. a story with sex in it. As opposed to the other way around. you said it was long. I took the time to come back a few times and glad i did. Thanks. Defiantly a favorite. 9/10 |
2006-12-28 01:13:44 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | asome story ... all good things take time, except killing the jews... lol jk jk |
2007-01-02 02:38:59 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | maybe a bit to much b/s but still awsome |