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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-12 08:04:35 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | simply incredible. well written, excellent structure, and intensely erotic. I loved the twisted ending. 10/10 |
| 2006-12-12 20:52:17 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | That was fucking insane and SO VERY FUCKING HEAVY with eroticism. You are truely, very talented. Hell, this could even be a movie, a porno probably, but a damn good movie nevertheless. |
| 2006-12-13 01:27:25 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | I'm glad you have received plenty of positive feedback, but I simply got bored with the story, it was well written, great use of laguage and ideas, I believ you are the best writer on this site, and your work deserves to be nationally published, but I simply got bored and lost interest. But since I know how to differentiate good from bad writting regardless if I like it ill give you a 9/10. |
| 2006-12-13 09:34:36 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | I give you a 8, but the story was way too long and so easy to lose intrest in it. Some of the places were over written with fancy words, and might have been better if maybe a little more common phrases. |
| 2006-12-13 19:53:58 | Two Sexy Sisters For Diablo | It is my contention, romantically perhaps, that people with an IQ over 130 and/or sufficient education, also enjoy wanking off. Hehehe. However, I wrote "Auntie's Amorous Animal" in hopes of pleasing those who also like less "fancy words" fyi .Thanks for the nice comments and suggestions all ;-) |