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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-15 12:18:46 | My true story | More more |
| 2007-06-17 10:02:12 | My true story | Overall, a good story. Definitely not true, any moron could spot that. I agree with junkfree: body to die for is a dead giveaway, and the earplugs are rediculous. In addition, there are inconsistencies: why did he say the other students in class wouldn't hear her scream if he had "saved her for last" (it makes it sound like noone else was there)? Also, you need to work on the "he shoved his dick in my mouth" part...if it was actually reluctant, it wouldn't have worked like that. Also, for a more believable story don't have the "victim" talking about her own body using words like "cunt". Finally, it was completely unbelievable from the get-go as soon as the narrator said she was a dumb blonde. Dumb blondes don't sit down and write narratives in a well laid out fashion. I give it a B (I would give it a C, but bonus points for taking the time to write it and post it, which is more than I have done!) |
| 2007-03-11 07:02:09 | Louise_(1) | it was nice you both got what you wanted.well told story of the experience. 9/10 thanx |
| 2007-03-11 11:37:25 | Louise_(1) | nice story thanks for sharing |
| 2007-03-11 18:43:12 | Louise_(1) | An okay story, but not a 9/10, probably more like a 6/10. |