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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-12 20:24:31 | Pope Joan 1 | i didn't even look at the title...... ime goin to hell |
| 2006-10-29 11:52:51 | Unexpected bait. | Not too bad for your fisrt story, but might i suggest breaking up the text into paragraphs, it helps to read clearer. (expescialy when they talk in quotes). Also it didn't take much to get his sister to do what he wanted =) Good Luck! |
| 2006-10-29 15:06:25 | Unexpected bait. | 1/10 sucked |
| 2006-10-29 15:13:14 | Unexpected bait. | sorry, but you've a long way to go before it can be said that you know how to write. |
| 2006-10-29 20:33:39 | Unexpected bait. | spelling - crap punctuation - crap paragraphs - crap idea - pretty good proof read before you post, or get someone else to do it for you |