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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2006-10-29 14:00:45 | School Daze chapter 6 | Learn how to spell or use spell check before you submit. Sir or Madam, I checked the story completely and found only one word that I misspelled “Shamu”. While not unforgivable, I apologize for my lack of research. There were two others that were redlined Skytower and Perignon as in Dom Perignon, however they were correct. That is the way they spell Skytower at Seaworld, and Dom Perignon in France. When I wrote yo’ and gonna’, it was to help describe the character by the way they spoke. When you include the speech in the quotes, it is generally known as poetic license. poetic license n. The liberty taken by an artist or a writer in deviating from conventional form or fact to achieve a desired effect. You must be a tough teacher. Good luck with that. og |
| 2006-10-29 14:10:06 | School Daze chapter 6 | Reader: 10-29-06 - 12:32. You wrote: an exercise in triteness and platitude. While triteness means: Lacking power to evoke interest through overuse or repetition; and platitude, indicates a lack of originality and a trite remark or statement, especially one expressed as if it were original or significant. I would like to know which part of the story you are talking about? Are you comparing one sex act with another, or the complete story with Richard and Linda’s involvement? I hope you are not accusing me of plagiarism, as all of my stories are original. Please let me know if you can embellish on your statement with anything more than a two word accusation. (As in the accused shall enjoy the right…to be informed of the nature and cause of the accusation). og |
| 2006-10-29 14:46:33 | School Daze chapter 6 | I know that I don’t have to defend Old Guys writing on school Daze as he has been rated the best writer on the site, but there are always other writers who are jealous so they make up a few details that don’t amount to nothing. If you are looking for stories that are all the same and lack interest, go back to the site and look through some of the many mindless chapters of just sex and no more, then compare it with Old guys stuff. You could probably make the statement about anybodies work, except for old guy. 10/10 for og. |
| 2006-10-29 21:14:07 | School Daze chapter 6 | Dear Old Guy, Despite what some idiots think, your writing , including spelling and grammar are exceptional. This story series is superb. I had missed Chapter 5 earlier, so read it and Chapter 6 and thoroughly enjoyed both. Thanks. |
| 2006-10-29 22:32:51 | School Daze chapter 6 | Old Guy...you need not defend yourself against the morons who critsize your work for grammatical and spelling errors. Your loyal readers will kindly do that little task for you. I can honestly say that this series is my second favorite following close behind 'mixed metaphors'. Thanks as always and keep them coming! GEorge in Cincy |