| 2006-11-15 03:43:52 |
The Old House and the Four Girls Part1
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Shite, worst I have read in ages...... |
| 2006-11-15 18:28:05 |
The Old House and the Four Girls Part1
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Your spelling is soooo bad I couldn't read the story. Learn to spell mr. ignorant. no vote |
| 2006-11-15 19:50:38 |
The Old House and the Four Girls Part1
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Terrible. Just terrible. I'd offer constructive help, but this is beyond the pail. Join a writing class perhaps? |
| 2006-11-15 20:18:09 |
The Old House and the Four Girls Part1
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Dude that just made me cross eyed, plot was cool but shallow. try better next time. But get a ditionary next to ya. |
| 2006-11-16 06:14:04 |
The Old House and the Four Girls Part1
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"gourgous girls that wasn't ever aloud"???? Where on God's green earth did you go to school? Anybody who can't even spell "gorgeous" and "allowed" for heaven's sake should smash his computer withg a sledge hammer. And to one of the reader commenters who urged that you should watch your "grammer," pal, it's spelled "grammar." You need help as well. Terrible story. 2/10 |