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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-27 14:49:36 | The Old House and the Four Girls Part1 | gourgous girls that wasn't ever aloud"???? where on god's green earth did you go to school? anybody who can't even spell "gorgeous" and "allowed" for heaven's sake should smash his computer withg a sledge hammer. and to one of the reader commenters who urged that you should watch your "grammer," pal, it's spelled "grammar." you need help as well. terrible story. 2/10 That idiot needs to take his own advice! Nice Story! |
| 2006-12-02 14:00:55 | The Old House and the Four Girls Part1 | really great cant wait for more |
| 2006-12-08 16:50:13 | The Old House and the Four Girls Part1 | You would get a much better rating if you cleaned up your English. Get an editor to help. |
| 2006-12-25 11:17:30 | The Old House and the Four Girls Part1 | you got gud ideas but you need more detail, so it lasts more than 20 secs. Spellin don't really matter as long as we all know wot u mean |
| 2007-03-18 12:13:00 | The Old House and the Four Girls Part1 | I thought you had a good idea...but the spelling did kinda suck. Still just edit it maybe add a few details and you got an ok story. |