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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-14 12:41:44 | Body art 3 - this time her daughter | Nicw work. |
| 2006-11-15 14:27:18 | Body art 3 - this time her daughter | good story, good fucking, good girl and mom |
| 2006-11-15 15:03:51 | Body art 3 - this time her daughter | Again, my apolgies to readers. If you have read this far, you will have seen two endings. The story should have stopped at the first "To be continued" What followed was an earlier draft which I left in by mistake. I am trying to have it removed |
| 2006-11-28 13:13:27 | Body art 3 - this time her daughter | Good detail, nice erotic descriptions, but the daughter is just too willing and "easy", and in previous stories the mother started calling him "master" without any prompting. Its just not believable. There are also passages that are very confusing and the scene in the pub with them exposing themselves just doesn't work - the dialog between mother and daughter is just bad. |
| 2006-11-28 22:51:55 | Body art 3 - this time her daughter | Hey boldman I know u can't write because I've read your stuff. But you can't read as well. u say Kathy was 2 easy Jack's known Kathy for over 2 months, she has a teenage crush for her art teacher, and has been interested in him from the start. In your "classic" you commit incest with your daughter within a day having not seen her for five years. Is that really realistic? Why Frances calls Jack master is explained half way through body art 2 I can see why you get confused easily. If u had one more brain cell it would be lonely |