| 2007-01-06 00:47:19 |
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This is by far, without question, the sickets, most disgusting tale I have ever read, or ever want to read. The author tried to create eroticism by having a Pedophile ply his vile practices in several children with their stupid, illiterate mother looking on. He did nothing to heat up the story by describing the action in an ertotic manner. Any more stories like this and I will become celibate. Right now I have to vomit!!!! |
| 2007-01-06 10:39:35 |
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Well, its certainly interesting, nice way to put things into another perspective. I can see why some people would be offended, but seeing as how the narrator went through a similar experience, I can see how she thinks it's right. 8/10 for me, keep up the good writing. |
| 2007-01-06 10:41:38 |
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wow... that sure was a different take on life.... nice work, keep it up. |
| 2007-01-06 20:14:05 |
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Great stuff, I hope you will write a sequal, or even make it a series. |
| 2007-01-06 23:28:46 |
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i'm dong an essay on sick freaks like you. i should call in the police. |