| 2007-01-13 10:40:04 |
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next time make sure the story fills the complete line.... i hate reading short lines. |
| 2007-01-17 16:42:13 |
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if some one have problems reading this or negative comments , why are they on this site in the first place :D |
| 2007-01-18 23:34:31 |
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Im one of those men who believes all sex is good and if the act doesnt hurt, then anything should be permisable no matter what the age. The pedophile wouldnt be declared an outcast if he would get the ok from parent & child before performing in whatever. Good Story, Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-01-25 01:02:34 |
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I thoroughly enjoyed the change of persepctive you chose to write this story in. It was a little off putting at first but once I got used to it I found it quite enjoyable, although I would have preferred more sexual detail. 9/10 |
| 2007-02-09 16:04:25 |
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The warped mother in this story was hilarious. I found the humor in this story more potent than the sensuality. Fairlywell written considering the genra. |