| 2007-07-02 21:26:00 |
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That was terrible. Good concept, but you need to put more thought into it, and you definitley need to look up spell check. I give it a 4/10, but keep trying. |
| 2007-07-05 20:13:07 |
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Good idea very poorly executed! You have no talent as a writer, and CUMMED is such a ridiculously stupid way of putting it dear! |
| 2007-07-13 00:17:28 |
one late night watching tv
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My god !!! Try harder next time |
| 2007-07-15 16:25:56 |
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waste of time i thought it was SHIT!!! |
| 2007-08-18 20:13:50 |
one late night watching tv
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wish i had a cock in my ass right now and one in my mouth at the same time |