| 2007-06-26 08:21:37 |
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Why did Mel turn into Tracie and then back into Mel. Keep your characters straight. A couple of misspelled words, but very good overall. Next time proof-read before submitting your story. |
| 2007-06-28 04:15:45 |
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A good story, i jerck off 2 times!! |
| 2007-06-30 15:06:55 |
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I would love to fuck that Dad Cop. |
| 2007-07-02 14:27:24 |
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hey dude i love the story couldn't keep my hands off my hard on |
| 2007-07-08 03:14:20 |
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Put dad, mom, and daughters all in same bed, and let things go |