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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-31 18:22:40 | Hannah and Gretel | exelent!!! next time fuck em in the ass |
| 2007-01-31 23:58:52 | Hannah and Gretel | s'all right |
| 2007-02-01 02:34:55 | Hannah and Gretel | The shift in tone from German Fairy Tale to Gothic was a bit jarring. Some parts were overwritten and it needed more sex. Still rates 7 of 10. |
| 2007-02-04 17:22:50 | Hannah and Gretel | Good writing, but I thought the story lacked a lot of feeling and, oh yes, good red-hot, sensuous s-e-x. S-e-x, you hear me? The writing gets a 7/10, the tired pace of the story, however, is no better than a 3/10. |
| 2007-02-05 05:28:17 | Hannah and Gretel | sorry this is downright boring....but the writing was okay |