| 2007-02-13 04:30:10 |
Hannah and Gretel
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wow this used to be my favorite fairy tale as a kid and now, well i dont like it anymore |
| 2007-02-24 09:17:14 |
Hannah and Gretel
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i rated this story decent due to the fact that it seems like you actually put time and effort into this. it needs a lot more sex, but all in all a good story. |
| 2007-03-06 14:06:11 |
Hannah and Gretel
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i really dont see why this is rated so high there isnt enough sex and its way to long honestly i give this story a 4. nice try though |
| 2007-03-11 11:25:49 |
Hannah and Gretel
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Cruddy. |
| 2007-03-13 05:14:20 |
Hannah and Gretel
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pitiful just give up |