| 2007-02-04 13:02:58 |
droit du seigneur
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Hey, ZYZX, I'm not a punk who slams everybody. I'm the Dick Slapper and if you check it out, there are many, many congratulatory comments I've made for writers who deserve it. This one doesn't deserve ti. (I don't know who the other "punk" is who wrote a negative comment.) |
| 2007-02-06 12:05:39 |
droit du seigneur
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i don't get the resistance to simple rules of structure when writing. The writer needs to be in charge of ensuring that they are commmunicating in the clearest manner possible, not just writing down whatever dribbles out of their head. mediocre 5 / 10 |
| 2007-04-25 17:20:32 |
droit du seigneur
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A poorly told lump of misspelt drivel. Poor grammar and punctuation. Don't bother with any more. Pleae. |
| 2007-09-11 12:22:43 |
droit du seigneur
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Dont give up! I want to read the rest! |
| 2007-02-01 06:05:37 |
Granny_(0)
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What the fuck is this? One lousy paragraph to make a whole story. No way, you turkey. learn how to do it right. Break your story up into eight or ten paragraphs so we can read it more easily. But I did finish your tale and all I can say is that it was very mediocre. Very mediocre. |