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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-14 12:34:34 | Unrequited? | i,d have loved to have been the one to have fucked that virgin ass |
| 2008-04-21 03:29:55 | Unrequited? | the story is a bit of a jumble but is rather good |
| 2007-02-02 08:36:54 | NeonGreen | sorry, I tried to read it. The print is terrible. Why don't you retype it in some other format so we can all enjoy. |
| 2007-02-02 12:08:14 | NeonGreen | If you put in line breaks and didn't put it in italics, you'd have a regular messed-up story. Boa's creepy and Lana's a fuck toy. The descriptions seem pretty good, but it's just so hard to read. It's a good start, but it needs work. =dreamer= |
| 2007-02-02 13:24:48 | NeonGreen | Id fuck and eat you better Lana, good start just space your paragraphs cutie. |