| 2007-04-03 08:04:39 |
A family of Love-Part IV
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I think you kind of rushed the chapter, but i liked it anyway, next chapter could you make it a bit longer. |
| 2007-04-21 12:37:26 |
A family of Love-Part IV
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stupid to let her father rape her rape is never to be condoned or encouraged you should go to jail just for writing about it |
| 2008-01-18 14:28:09 |
A family of Love-Part IV
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This was not "dicipline", it was RAPE. Odd that with all the descriptors this site allows for a story, you left this little detail out. Maybe you don't know that some readers would prefer not to read such stories. It's about being informed and making the choice to read or not with full information, not making a value judgement. |
| 2008-01-29 01:37:35 |
A family of Love-Part IV
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Definately need part 5. Don't let dad take little sisters virginity. Let boyfriend take it! |
| 2007-02-01 17:29:21 |
Unrequited?
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ANOTHER! |