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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2007-02-28 18:19:31 | Mixed Metaphors X | I just wrote a comment about Chapter VIII - perhaps it should have been put here. Please keep Tony and Becky's love as pure and devoted to each other as it is now! Perhaps Jason could have as beautiful a love and life with Diane as Tony and Becky have. This series is so full of human insight and loving, frank, and honest emotion that it is wholesome. Such tenderness these people have! Wouldn't it be a beautiful world if most couples were so open and free about their love, and their lust, and their aspirations, and their hopes for everyone as well as for themselves?!!! |
| 2007-02-28 21:08:07 | Mixed Metaphors X | I wish to thank you for your wonderful comments, and your comments about my errors. It gives me such a good feeling that someone enjoys reading my “hen scratching”. As far as the way people feel about each other, I enjoy writing about the lucky half of the population, who find a good life partner and are happy and content in their lives. I grew up on Disney movies and “Happily ever after” endings. When you see the news there is very little written about such things, however I’m sure in my mind that people like Tony and Becky are out there, and I am very happy for them. I do not use voice recognition software … probably due to the sound of my voice. I just use my two index fingers and occasionally a thumb or two. I have looked all through the chapters of MM and can find no ref |
| 2007-02-28 21:56:38 | Mixed Metaphors X | From below: I have looked all through the chapters of MM and can find no reference to a pick up truck, and am not aware of the use of the word hooky. In the future I will endeavor to watch my word usage a little closer, and I apologize for causing any distractions. Hopefully “Microsoft Word” will also try a little harder with its spell checker. To anyone reading this, please don’t get angry, however I just sent in chapter 11. It is Saturday, they are having a party for the children and there is no mention of sex. Somehow it just seemed inappropriate, as the day was set-aside for the kids. When you said Jason and Diane, you meant, “Jake” … right? By the way, thanks again for calling my work literature. Dave |
| 2007-03-01 01:55:39 | Mixed Metaphors X | Great!, but don't let the intern near Becky. I agree with the above. These writings are no way Pornographic. They're just salted with sexual expression. X aka Mike |
| 2007-03-01 12:52:05 | Mixed Metaphors X | Dave - Chapter 11 hasn't been published yet so I haven't read it. What you did about no sex was appropriate. THANKS! Phuck up vs Pick up is in Chapter V111. Here is the quote: “No we can’t. I’m not doing this just for you. I’m doing it for me and all the girls out there who don’t have a man, for all the guys who have a problem with ED, for all the older men who take Viagra by the hand full, for the women who are no longer whistled at by the guys in the puck up truck. I’m doing this for everyone who loves the feeling of wonderful sexual contact.” This is still great work!! |