| 2007-03-05 23:01:14 |
I've been waiting so long ...
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Not bad, but needs a paragraph break here and there -- it's just line after line after line of text. I gave it a five, but would have been more if it had been an easier read... |
| 2007-03-07 20:49:02 |
I've been waiting so long ...
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learn to write idiot!! |
| 2007-03-11 15:05:37 |
I've been waiting so long ...
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Do some more paragraph breaks. This too tightly together, but let's have the next installment. |
| 2007-03-19 21:40:26 |
I've been waiting so long ...
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oh hell.... |
| 2007-03-24 10:42:43 |
I've been waiting so long ...
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Very arousing!! Makes me wish I was Cole. |