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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-21 16:51:17 | The Whore part 4 by Tommy | cool write more plezzzz |
| 2007-02-20 09:10:31 | After The Dance_(0) | Awesome |
| 2007-02-20 12:30:46 | After The Dance_(0) | The first three quarters were excellent, but you rushed it way too much once dad got involved. You could have made the whole story oral-only, and it would have been fabulous. once dad called rebecca a slut, she just turned into a totally passive cum-receptacle. Ass-to-mouth is totally gross. you really didn't need that at the end. You didn't need to go for the hat trick, either. (Three holes in one game) When Dad and Rebecca seduce michelle in part two, pace it more like the first section of the story, not the second. Your writing skill is very good. It's good to read a writer who takes the trouble to format dialogue and proofread. Thanks. =dreamer= |
| 2007-02-20 12:39:20 | After The Dance_(0) | fucking excellent |
| 2007-02-20 16:31:15 | After The Dance_(0) | This one doesn't do it 4me. Sorry mate :( |