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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-23 13:47:56 | Friendly Massage | why do people always say something about grammer mistakes DOES IT MATTER |
| 2007-02-23 14:52:40 | Friendly Massage | Good story, but for the first half, I thought the story was written in the persona of a girl... maybe by adding a small hint about the person being a girl will solve it. Otherwise, great story |
| 2007-02-23 16:03:54 | Friendly Massage | To answer 02-22-07 - 18:54, a THO is a "titty hard-on" or erect nipples. I had to look it up on the urban dictionary. I agree with the previous commenter: The gender of the storyteller is ambiguous until he actually pulls out his cock. He doesn't have a name either. I loved the plot. It was very sweet and kind. Heck, it was downright romantic. That quality more than makes up for the other minor flaws. I liked the realism of the info that you put in parenthesis, though parenthesis are usually bad style. Thanks for not making a big deal about the absence of a hymen in a girl who was an "accomplished kick boxer". An intact hymen would have been very unlikely. Actually, a little more detail on her athletic physique would have been great. Great job so far. Thanks. =dreamer= |
| 2007-02-23 18:25:46 | Friendly Massage | That was very well written. Kudos. 10/10 |
| 2007-02-23 19:43:56 | Friendly Massage | you know that one of the worst things you can do when you come in a girl is clean her out later it pushes your semen closer to her egg |