| 2007-02-28 23:14:26 |
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I really like this...reminds me when I was still in college,,,hehehe....good job...write more...probably part 2 to this... |
| 2007-03-01 01:58:59 |
The drive home_(1)
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It was a very good story better than most, the grammer was not the best....but overall good 9/10. |
| 2007-03-02 12:48:20 |
The drive home_(1)
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Good story - one thing I would say is that the past tense of "slide" is "slid" not "slide" again. Excellent story - 9/10. |
| 2007-03-15 19:24:48 |
The drive home_(1)
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who the fuck cares about the damn grammar it was a good story its not he is trying to publish or something |
| 2007-03-18 09:48:23 |
The drive home_(1)
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good job dude 8/10 |