| 2007-02-27 12:14:21 |
The drive home_(1)
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Good story but you need to check your grammer a few times before you submit it. 8/10 |
| 2007-02-27 12:36:14 |
The drive home_(1)
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You used I in referrence to multiple people :-p good story, though |
| 2007-02-27 14:45:45 |
The drive home_(1)
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great story loved the anal and it was long lol not many ppl do long stories and you made me cumm twice that is a rare thing but anyhow i love the story keep it up man 10/10 |
| 2007-02-27 15:39:39 |
The drive home_(1)
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its fitting not fighting, but good story over all. |
| 2007-02-27 15:40:10 |
The drive home_(1)
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it was good but ya check ur grammer and slepping but keep on writing |